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Charity commission of sorts for :iconvbabe1:. It's done in the Sera Myu style so that's why the uniform's a bit different ^_^ She's trying to help get a website started to get Sera Myu to America. That'd be so fun to see ^_^ Auditions are in a month so I tried to finish this really really fast.

I figured I'd also double it as a Happy Easter picture since my future mother in law is coming over today and I probably won't have any time to draw since this is doubling as easter time and wedding prep ^^;

Besides Usagi can be the easter bunny, right? ;)

Critiques


:iconlemaffin:
Wow! I really have nothing negative to say about this piece. Her right foot is turned at an awkward angle, but this is absolutely perfect!
I'm not sure I like the pink in her hair, just because it's not quite dark enough to be used as a shadow. The middle pink isn't, at least. THe darkest is perfect.
The shading is perfect everywhere! Her hands are cute and proportionate, and I loove her shoulders/neck. You did that really well.

I'm not sure I like the way you shaded her buns, but that's just me. c: Maybe you used too dark of a shadow there or something.
I'd probably add some shine to her hair, as well, but that's up to you.
Her skirt looks a bit fake, like it's molded there or something, but I absolutely love the shading you used there. Ahhh! Teti! stop improving! ;_;

I really have nothing more to say! Great job <33
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:iconmclaranium:
Excellent colours. Full of colours! Deep and brighty colours! The Serena's expression always tender, shy and lovely. So well done. The pose belongs so good with her expression, the lines add a good motion, movement, the skirt in motion too looks fantastic to this one, even his hair expresses motion! "too much movement?" No, the background is static, that's add some balance. I dislike the rabbits ears (look like knife) but that's only my imagination don't care. I agree with the other comment about the feet, just that. I would like you own the high - resolution size (big size format) in your computer then save it in safe! could be a good printing.
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:iconchaoie:
awww, how cute :aww:

HAPPY EASTER :wave:

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:icontajii-chan:
Happy Easter~! ^o^

She's adorable~!! >w<

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:icongrotesqua:
So cute :]
I love lilac shade *_*

Happy Easter

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:iconaeriim:
Aw that's adorable!
Happy Easter to you too >u<
And I love Sera Myu! xD
:iconreveta:
^^ happy easter, i've giving you a critique. *flees to do homework* ;;
:iconkyukazumi:
tjis is so lovely!! I like it ^^

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:iconsetokaibablue-eyes:
So totally cute, cute, cute!!
And happy easter to you too, darling :hug: :hug:

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:iconkoori-sae-chan:
Happy easter!
She is so adorable in your style! :heart:

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:iconmitsukino-tennyo:
so ubber cute, happy easter

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:iconliliannoel:
it is beautful...:) i love your work...
today i finally completed my pic wth pcgraphic:) your tutorial is the best for me:) :D thanks that you dd it XD

[link] this is my pic,which i did with your tutorial for paintng:)

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