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The Shouting Match by Tetiel The Shouting Match by Tetiel
Another Visual Novel CG commission for :iconkomi-tsuku: and the last one for this month. Thanks so much for commissioning me <3 I finished this stuff way before deadline but I was so excited I just couldn't help myself xD

So this is Náme (blonde hair, Yoi (green hair), and Anton. Yoi took Anton out to lunch and returned him 30 minutes late which causes a cat fight between the two girls over who's being irresponsible, has a stick up their ass, etc. Anton really freaking needs a vacation from these two arguing like this day in and day out. This was so not in the job description.

I'm really not used to shading/drawing side perspective. It's actually pretty challenging and difficult to find proper references on HOW to shade anime noses like that. I just gave up and went with it (tips/critiques are appreciated and I might fix it later). YOU SHALL HAVE NOSTRILS! Forgive me, I haven't slept in 36 hours and that's currently cracking me up. I gotta go to bed :(
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Miss-Mae Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved this scene! And oddly enough, I didn't realize this was even your art. You have improved so much! :D
Hypersonic53 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like this! And the boss' expression.
fluffy8me Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
the look like sailor neptune and sailor uranus :D
sebo3e Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011
SockyDominiq Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This has probably been brought up before, but I thought this was Uranus and Neptune xD But hey, good job! I love browsing your gallery!
mayasato Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist
At first I thought it was Sailor Neptune and Uranus! Lol! Hehe i love this art ^^
Tetiel Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Lol you're actually not the only one as far as that goes. I think it's what my gallery mostly consists of. If you looked at the original character models, they're completely different especially in personality xD

By the way, thanks so much for the watch and all the favs <3
mayasato Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist
You're welcome! :D I just love sailor moon.
LPhela Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011   General Artist
It looks great!:D

Your side noses works nicely!: )
I think you solved that problem neatly.

Since it is a moment of conflict, I think the picture is not too much.
You can always blur out the things in the background like Anton and his table.
That way the focus is more on the 2 shouting girls, but doesn't lose Anton's sigh for rest.
Tetiel Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you :D And actually that's a good suggestion. I might play around with that ^_^
LPhela Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011   General Artist
You are welcome!:D


After that reply there is an alternate method to make it look less busy (although I really like the-right-in-your-face version).
You could also make a sillouette of Anton and the table and then put whirls on his glasses and a spiral thingy (like you can see in some comics when a person is totally tired or knocked out unconciously) above his head.
For the sillouette you could fill up with black or other deep (and dark) colours.
EvilKateh Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011
I've always loved the way you do hair! :heart:
The detail is amazing :iconiloveitplz:

(I hope you don't take this the wrong way ^^;!)
Initally looking at this it feels a little busy and overwhelming (sorry ^^;)
But once you get used to that, aww its gorgeous:heart:, i never have any idea how to shade noses side on, it's ingenius to shade the nostrils, (I might be stealing that idea from you xD)
I also adore the way you coloured the background ! :love: Anton's chair looks great :D
Tetiel Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Haha, thank you <3 Oh, and if you're ever critiquing me, don't worry about me taking it the wrong way. Other people have said that, too, and I appreciate knowing it! I'm going to be doing some of these in the future and I'll be sure to limit myself with what's going on xD

I'm not used to doing either sequential or illustration work. I kind of go overboard and try to fit in too much at once!
EvilKateh Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011
I do that as well! :oops:
Although most of the time i'm way to lazy and end up with too much space in the picture instead xD

I'm glad your ok with what I said! :glomp:
Koydith Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
At first I though they were Michiru and Haruka XD

I'm not trying to be rude or anything, and probably don't even know what am I talking about, I've always liked your art but I'm not too convinced about this one
To me the composition seems a bit odd. Placing the two scenes (tired guy and arguing pair) is a bit confusing at first glance, maybe it should be to different pics instead.
Also I think it could look better with a different angle, and from more distance to be able to see the place better, since the way it looks now it's a bit hard to tell the distance between the sitting guy and the other two, since the colors and shadow don't really reflect much depth, while the size difference clearly does.
Tetiel Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Nono, never worry about offending me with critique. I find it very helpful. You're right. I was worried about there being too much going on, but at the same time I really wanted to include him xD I think it might work with the game since it is showing the background that I worked off of immediately before/after this picture is shown so hopefully it's not a complete blunder.

Thanks. You've given me a lot to think about for future pictures :)
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