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Hiya, I'm critiquing on behalf of :iconcritiqueweek:. First off, I think you did extremely well especially for not using any textures and creating your own fur. I'm horrible at fur so I certainly admire it :heart:

The thing that I suppose sticks out the most for me as being a problem is the chest area. You tried really hard with it and I can tell, but I think you emphasized it way too much :p
Let's bring out the very... well built... Brad Pitt
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The abs are meant to stand out, sure, but it shouldn't stand out too much and should blend into the skin really well. It should be subtle, but still there. Do you know what I mean? It's the same problem with the shadows on the hand bones. If you're going to put that much shadow on those details, you should do the same with the rest of the skin.

Anyways, I hope that helps out a bit :D Have a great day and thanks for participating!! :heart:
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